alls i can say is that i wasn't paying attention to the sisters big cry fest. get over it. stop being an idiot. yr gonna get everyone killed. and i'm not gonna watch you sit there and cradle your sister for hours on end, nor listen to you talk about how you missed all her b-days cuz you were away at college.
who cares.
the structure of the story is a pretty interesting take on traditional zombie movies. it seems to dwell on the lingering humanity involved with the group, whereas several other flicks in the genre seem to dismiss that notion or at least glaze over it. i can't decide if its a fair representation of how people would really react. but i do like the idea they toyed with that an event like this would very much damage people in their mental capacity.
don't know if clinging to this definition of human character is a result of it being fairly early on in the zombocolypse, or if its gonna be one of those "mankind is good, and must be good to overcome our demons" type of thing.
not completely sold on the dialog or movement of character development, but its not too shabby. hopefully it rounds out in a nice way. it seems like there is trouble developing individual dialog and personality because the group is so large, and they have concentrated on so few of characters. there are times it seems like some of the smaller characters are really crying out for attention and their actions seem out of place. but i'm definitely willing to see how it pans out.