also you get a little loose on some of those runs, the only thing that is saving you is that distortion. normally this is where i would say it is one of the worst sounding distortions ever, but i recognize there is an entire following of guitar players that love this metallic sound on the highs and muddied lows. to me the whole sound of it is techie and i can't stand it, but agree to disagree.
did like the bit you did with the delay.