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Re: goEMAW.com's Poetry Thread
« Reply #50 on: June 19, 2024, 09:21:40 AM »
What is this final stanza to this poem about?

I have seen them riding seaward on the waves
Combing the white hair of the waves blown back
When the wind blows the water white and black.
We have lingered in the chambers of the sea
By sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown
Till human voices wake us, and we drown.
He is dreaming and is woken up to real life and it sucks.

Both KK's and Dlew's interpretations are appreciated and well taken, but this one made me lol. It be true, tho, me boys.
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Re: goEMAW.com's Poetry Thread
« Reply #51 on: June 19, 2024, 09:29:01 AM »
It's always death and dying and stuff. Always.
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« Reply #52 on: June 19, 2024, 09:52:55 AM »
It's always death and dying and stuff. Always.

The rest of the poem is a lot about loneliness and banality.
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Re: goEMAW.com's Poetry Thread
« Reply #53 on: June 20, 2024, 11:47:55 AM »
Tugma, sugma, ligma, fugma.

All of the above would be great but above all I am looking for someone to luvma.
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Re: goEMAW.com's Poetry Thread
« Reply #54 on: June 30, 2024, 01:12:48 AM »
Seems a bit prophetic, no?

The Second Coming

BY WILLIAM BUTLER YEATS

Turning and turning in the widening gyre   
The falcon cannot hear the falconer;
Things fall apart; the center cannot hold;
Mere anarchy is loosed upon the world,
The blood-dimmed tide is loosed, and everywhere   
The ceremony of innocence is drowned;
The best lack all conviction, while the worst   
Are full of passionate intensity.

Surely some revelation is at hand;
Surely the Second Coming is at hand.   
The Second Coming! Hardly are those words out   
When a vast image out of Spiritus Mundi
Troubles my sight: somewhere in sands of the desert   
A shape with lion body and the head of a man,   
A gaze blank and pitiless as the sun,   
Is moving its slow thighs, while all about it   
Reel shadows of the indignant desert birds.   
The darkness drops again; but now I know   
That twenty centuries of stony sleep
Were vexed to nightmare by a rocking cradle,   
And what rough beast, its hour come round at last,   
Slouches towards Bethlehem to be born?
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Re: goEMAW.com's Poetry Thread
« Reply #55 on: June 30, 2024, 10:39:35 AM »
That’s a really good one.

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« Reply #56 on: June 30, 2024, 03:52:48 PM »
In Flanders Fields
BY JOHN MCCRAE

In Flanders fields the poppies blow
Between the crosses, row on row,
    That mark our place; and in the sky
    The larks, still bravely singing, fly
Scarce heard amid the guns below.

We are the Dead. Short days ago
We lived, felt dawn, saw sunset glow,
    Loved and were loved, and now we lie,
        In Flanders fields.

Take up our quarrel with the foe:
To you from failing hands we throw
    The torch; be yours to hold it high.
    If ye break faith with us who die
We shall not sleep, though poppies grow
        In Flanders fields.


The only two things in life that make it worth livin'
Is guitars that tune good and firm feelin' women
I don't need my name in the marquis lights
I got my song and I got you with me tonight
Maybe it's time we got back to the basics of love