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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #200 on: December 13, 2017, 09:08:12 AM »
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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #201 on: December 13, 2017, 09:08:50 AM »
Did chum put that in here because he thinks it was sexual assault?

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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #202 on: December 13, 2017, 09:12:26 AM »
Two consenting adults went on a date and banged after. Literally happens every day all over the world. Thankfully she didn't accuse him of rape and ruin his life.

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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #203 on: December 13, 2017, 09:15:12 AM »
Did chum put that in here because he thinks it was sexual assault?

Nope.

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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #204 on: December 13, 2017, 09:16:54 AM »
People's responses to it seem to be pretty revealing, though.

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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #205 on: December 13, 2017, 09:18:14 AM »
But where were the cats?
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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #206 on: December 13, 2017, 09:21:07 AM »
I too was expecting cats. There was enough foreshadowing of it.

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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #207 on: December 13, 2017, 09:21:37 AM »
I think it's implied the cats watched

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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #208 on: December 13, 2017, 09:27:34 AM »
Viral short story.

https://www.newyorker.com/magazine/2017/12/11/cat-person

Why did I read that

I has the same feeling. One of those things like: well I made it this far surely it’s almost over.
Are you fools serious?

I am legit curious as to why you are so incredulous about this. What were your thoughts?

FTR, I thought it was very well written.

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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #209 on: December 13, 2017, 09:32:24 AM »
I too was expecting cats. There was enough foreshadowing of it.

i think the title implies she was putting out fire with gasoline

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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #210 on: December 13, 2017, 10:00:07 AM »
Idk, this just seems obnoxiously bad to me:
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Not so cute that she would have, say, gone up to him at a party, but cute enough that she could have drummed up an imaginary crush on him if he’d sat across from her during a dull class—though she was pretty sure that he was out of college, in his mid-twenties at least.
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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #211 on: December 13, 2017, 10:03:58 AM »
You gotta give some license to fiction writing. It’s trying to convey a feeling just as much as an idea.

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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #212 on: December 13, 2017, 11:21:51 AM »
Cute couple

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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #213 on: December 13, 2017, 11:41:58 AM »
Except for the very end it’s pretty easy to imagine this as a romantic comedy starring Seth Rogan.

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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #214 on: December 13, 2017, 12:16:35 PM »
Idk, this just seems obnoxiously bad to me:
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Not so cute that she would have, say, gone up to him at a party, but cute enough that she could have drummed up an imaginary crush on him if he’d sat across from her during a dull class—though she was pretty sure that he was out of college, in his mid-twenties at least.

I think that sentence conveys a ton of information about both characters - you get a decent feel for how the guy looks, but more importantly, it establishes her mindset as a shy girl who still gets crushes in class.

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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #215 on: December 13, 2017, 12:19:45 PM »
Viral short story.

https://www.newyorker.com/magazine/2017/12/11/cat-person

Why did I read that

I has the same feeling. One of those things like: well I made it this far surely it’s almost over.
Are you fools serious?

I am legit curious as to why you are so incredulous about this. What were your thoughts?

FTR, I thought it was very well written.

I thought it was great, but I really like short stories. As for reasons to read it:

1) Um, you said yourself it was well written
2) A lot of women said it was important to them
3) It's a freaking viral short story, it's good to experience that type of pop culture IMO

Also worth a quick read (if you can get over the goddam vox headline with a comma before explained):

https://www.vox.com/culture/2017/12/12/16762062/cat-person-explained-new-yorker-kristen-roupenian-short-story


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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #216 on: December 13, 2017, 12:27:30 PM »
I'd seen it lambasted by pvegs on twitter, tweeted w/o comment by a Hot 97 DJamer and then finally posted in this thread.  I was distracted the whole way trying to figure out why it was viral.

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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #217 on: December 13, 2017, 12:29:59 PM »
No clue why it's viral but I like vodka sodas so maybe let's not assume it's all true.

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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #218 on: December 13, 2017, 12:30:56 PM »
I was distracted the whole way trying to figure out why it was viral.

yeah this is me also.
if i came across it in a book of short stories i would have loved it. but i got there from the pit so i was confused the whole time

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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #219 on: December 13, 2017, 12:42:42 PM »
If you read the pit, you should maybe have a better understanding of why it went viral than if you didn't.

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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #220 on: December 13, 2017, 12:57:30 PM »
I was confused at what Red Vines were and I why I have never of it before.

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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #221 on: December 13, 2017, 01:06:38 PM »
I was confused at what Red Vines were and I why I have never of it before.

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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #222 on: December 13, 2017, 01:15:55 PM »
I have not seen the film or read the book.

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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #223 on: December 13, 2017, 01:22:48 PM »
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Re: A Fine Line
« Reply #224 on: December 13, 2017, 01:45:19 PM »
between Wayne's World and the SNL short as well as being an american grown up I find it astonishing you've never heard of that candy